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Ei lekha ta jemon i hok , kichhu sheekarokti achhe . MM e jog dewar por Soumitra da , Subir Kaku , Hridoy da soho onnanno bondhu der theke ja ja shikhechhi , cheyechi kichhuta HOME WORK hisebe dewar, Teacher ra bichar korben homework kemon holo.

Soumitra dar uposthiti o nirikkhon , Subir kakur utsaho or Hridoy dar Fon e ebong onnanno bhabe tips gulo kaje lagiyechhi. Chesta korechhi Onader kotha moto kichhu ekta korbar. Bhul truti hobei , bt Kichhu jinish niye experiment korte amar bhalo legechhe . Onek kichhu mathay rekhechhilam eta lekhar somoy . Lekha ta ektu purono , MM aj dilam. Pathhok ra janaben .

ar Teachers Kobita niye alochona choluk , ami classwork korte thaki , tobei na HOMEWORK joma dite parbo    . Dhonnobad sobaike. Bhalo thakun sobai.

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02 Mar 2006

Sukanta
Kohinoor,
apni jader naam korlen taNder kache aami kichui noi, kobitao khub ekta bhuji na, tai sir hishabe noy, pathok hishabe du to kotha boli. tobe seriously nebar dorkar nei.

prothomoto aquastics sobdo ta. eta ki oporiharzo chilo okhane ?? onnyo bangla protisobdo diye protisthapon korle khub ki bemanan hobe ??
secondly, bosonto sobdotar por duibar eseche 'mone koray'. aamar mone holo eta thakle kobita ti abritti korte hoyto srutimodhur hoy, kintu ei repeatation ta mone hoy erano jeto.
'bhaga bhagi' sobdo tao kobitay ektu kane laagche. ei sob ar ki.. tobe aabaro bolchi kichu mone korben na.

03:52pm 02 Mar

Balmiki
fantastic Kohinoor ...

06:10pm 02 Mar

Balmiki
prottekta shobdo bhishon apt, jeno mepe ( othocho spontaneously ) boshaano .... acoustics ei proyog tukhor laglo sobishesh jokhon shobdoti elo sukno patar ( rustle ) er potobhumite ...

pa tipe hariye jabar pala odbhut shunodor bishonnotae fadeout ... kobitaTi purotai bhishonbhabe bhalo lege gelo ...

06:13pm 02 Mar

Chhaya
Sokale uthe-i kobitata etobar porlam---hupchap Balmikir motamot deoa dekhlam---Kohinoor erpor bolar kichhu nei----tabuo prankhule boli---darun--

06:25pm 02 Mar

Jharna
noor...hridoy o subirdake oshonkhyo dhonnyobaad...hya sotti style bodleche ar lekhatao darun...ashole emon kichhu manush thake jara backbone hishebe dariye thakatayi onek boro paona...amar khetreo achhen dujon....ami tader kachhe chirotore rrini...ar konodin jodi kritoggota swikarer sujog ashe tader dujonke janiye jabo nirdwidhay...

tomar ei lekhata khubbbbbbbb bhalolaglo...jaayi ekhon schoole aaj theke porikhya...bye bye...

jharna

07:31pm 02 Mar

Subir
Boro bipode felle hey. Japan ghure Kobiguru likhechhilen Rrin ki kore dhon hoye othe. Tumi ekhon kobita jogote etotai dhoni je ei okinchitkor-er kachhe rrin swikarer aar kono jayga pore nei. Tobu tumi bhalobese ekta daityo diyechho bole du-ekta kotha boltei hoy.

Tomar ei kobita anektai abstract, tobuo aschorjo dhora-chNoyar modhyei achhe, jeta khub sohoj kaaj noy bolei ami mone kori. Backgroundta bodhhoy ami thik-i dhorte perechhi, tai Acoustic bosonto, otit hoyeo sosobde birajoman, ekhon-o, hridoyer govire. Oi "mone koray" sobdota dubar babohar korar pechhone ami ja karon bujechhi ta ei rokom: 1. Acoustic bosonto mone poray 2. mone poray aaro chena sobdo bhagabhagir kotha ittadi(orthat ekhane mone poray sobdota emphasize korar jonyo babohrito).
Borong amar kane legechhe anyo jaigate. "Kotha chhilo bristi bhalobese/ eksathe kaan patbo kache" ar "Barthota nona swader bristi jhoray ni:shobde/ hahakar naame" ei kota bhishon sundor line-er majhe "Athocho" kothata mone hoyechhe taal kete diyechhe (ekantoi bYaktigoto mot). Aar ekta kotha mone hoyechhe, Pa er por antoto dubar "tipe" kothata babohar na korle orthota aneker kachhe poriskar hoyna bolei amar dharona.

ekhane jara lekhen, tNader modhye, Sukanta, amar anyotomo priyo kobi/godyokar. Bishesh kore "Ami-o Sharat Bhalobasi"(Naamta ki bhul korlam?)porar por, amar mone hoyechhe, Sukanta anek uNchudorer lekhok/kobi. Atyonto constructive motamot dei, tumi oNor kothagulo bhebe dekhte paro.

Seshe boli, apurbo likhechho. Year ending e officer kaaj korte korte kotota thik mulyaon korte parlam janina. Bakita sakkhate hotei pare. Bhalo theko.



11:29pm 02 Mar

Amit Tribedi
bhison i sundor...BOIYAKORON pathok hisebe boli, almost perfect.....ar nehaat ROSOGNYO hisebe?...it's awesome ..  



11:31pm 02 Mar

Subir
Arekta kotha. Opore joto sohoje alochona/samalochona korechhi, lekhta tar chaite anek, anek kothin bapar. Ami nije oi ek-i boktobyo niye likhle er cheye anek anek kharap likhtam bolei amar dharona.

cheers.



11:40pm 02 Mar

Kohinoor
Ek ek kore alochona kori.

Sukanta da onek bhalo laglo apnar motamot peye . Kintu motamot jeta diyechhen obossoi seta amar bhalor jonno , kobitar bhalo r jonno , tai SERIOUSLY to nitei hobe . Ar mone kora kori   
He he he ami ki type chhokra se byapare idea nei to tai    . Khub behaya type er , i mean shekhar jonno chorom behayapona korte pari . Karon shikhte badha nei , lojja o nei . Ar sahitYo emon ekta byapar jekhane shekhar shesh nei , bYaptir sheema nei. Honestly bolchhi goto december'05 er age ami jibone konodin kobita likhini/porini . School er pathho boi er kobita pore jotota hoy arki. Ekdum ZERO theke shuru kore ajke ekhono ami likhchhi . Eta amar kachhe boro prapti , onektai positive progression. Karon amar kachhe jiboner protita muhurter +ve movement ta important . cuz i dont care abt -ve things. Se jai Hok..Jokhon ja mone hobe khola mone bolun , amar unnoti hobe . Ami bishesh bhabe 3 joner nam korechi karon , Onara sobai amake bYaktigoto bhabe chenen , ebong nijer barir chheler moto kore sob somoy agle rakhen , sei soho onek tips den , proyojon e bhul korle kan mule shikhiye dewar manoshikota o rakhen . Tai apni jodi apon bhebe kokhono kichhu bolen tobe seta ,aamar kachhe onek boro prapti.

Kobita proshonge boli...jehetu SHOBDO byapartay highlight korte cheyechhi

TITLE
SHUKNO PATA=SmRITI patar shobdo
HAHAKAR er shobdo
SHOBDER DwARTHOK ByABOHAR -> SHOBDO=WORDS, SHOBDO=SOUND
CHENA SHOBDO= PROMISES/WORDS that we make , HEARTBEAT share kora , nissasher shobdo .
PA TIPE hariye jawar NIROBOTA
KANNAR SHOBDO , NEEROBOTAR SHOBDO ittadi arki.

Tai shobdo jodi thake tai shob i amar kachhe SHOBDOBIGyAN bole mone hoyeche ,tai ACOUSTICS word ta use korechhi , AQUASTIC bole kichhu bojhai ni , (jodio ami AQUASTIC er sothhik mane ami jani na )

Mone pore kotha ta 2 bar je karone use korechhi seta SUBIR KAKU exactly dhorechhen ebong onar bichonkkhonota amake obhibhuto korechhe.

Ar bhagabhagi niye khub ekta bhabi ni , just simply boshano , SHARE bojhate cheyechhi. Hoyto apnar sahajje onnobhabe lekhar shujog pelam lekha ta.

Ar hya sukanta da ami kintu panar khub boro ekjon fan , tai plssss freely sob bolun , ami shikhbo.

Abrittijoggota niye RAAD kichhu kotha likhechhilen , tai RAAD ke dhal hisebe bYabohar kore ami na hoy e jatray pithh bNachai.  

Subir kaku :- Apni boddo binoyi , kintu ja shotti ta to sheekar kortei hoy , ei je dayitto niye sob somoy pashe thaken , alochona koren , seta amar kachhe onek dami je !!

apni to ekdum thhik dhorechhen prottekta byapar, infact kal onek raat e jokhon POST kori tokhon ei OTHOCHO niye bhebechhi onek . Kintu shbdo ta tule dile BREAK ta mon e dhorchhilo na , abar PARA bhangle ektu halka lagchhilo . Tai onek do-tanay pore use kore fellam . Re-construct korle obossoi onnobhabe likhte partam hoyto .

Ar hNya

"Kotha chhilo bristi bhalobese/ eksathe kaan patbo kache" ar "Barthota nona swader bristi jhoray ni:shobde(/) hahakar naame"

hahakar er line break ta thakbe na  

Karon ei line niye onek bhebechhi, Hridoy dar tips mene ami koyek bhabe likhi ebong mane kori , 3 bhabe

1. HAHAKAR NAME NISSHOBDE
2. HAHAKAR NAM_e (bristi jhoray) BYARTHOTA
3. BreaK dile , ager line oi khantay shesh , then ektu pause diye HAHAKAR name , ebar ekta deerghosWas fellam.Ei type er onubhuti aarki.

onno bhabe likhechhilam ei line guolo. Onek pakamo korechhi    obosese mone dhorlo ei type er formation ta. 3 dhoroner mane peyechhi .

Aar sakhYate onek onek alap to hobei . Eta niye ami obossoi abar bhabbo. Apni to janen ami sob somoy i monojog di sobar alochonay.

Jharna di , eta thhik je jader nam korlam tara bishesh bhabe inspire kroechhen , kintu tomader sobar kotha kintu bhuli ni . Tomader utsaho , alochona, kothopokothon amake ei jaygay enechhe , tai sobar obodan bhola oshombhob . Arko kal i bolchhilo "KOBITA TO ONEK HOLO ... EBAR ONNO KICHHU" hya amader 2 jon er ei topic theke sei topic e switch over er sWabhab ta khocha marchhe , life e bibhinno jinish try korbo , bibhinno jinish shikhbo/janbo ei bYaparta onek help korechhe nana bhabe. Kintu ei je tobuo amra MM e achhi onekdin etai boro paona tomader theke.

Didi, chhaya di, Amit tomader bhalo legechhe jene tripti pelam. Tomra sobai chomotkar.

ar BALMIKI da    tomake APNI APNI korte parbo na , TUMI bolbo    he he he (dont mind)

thanks 4 being there . Echhara ar ki ba bolte pari. SHOBDO diye ONUBHUTI bojhanoy ami je odokkho.

01:09am 03 Mar

Sukanta
aasole aami enraji te khub durbol    tai "acoustics" spelling ta bhul likhechi. sorry.

01:21am 03 Mar

Kohinoor
ow Online achhen naki Dada . Apnake abar o dhonobad . Ota typo korechhilen   Ow bujhini sorry . Niyomito chai. Ar sobai bolchhilo FERARI ta apni i ,tai obhinondo janai apnakae last 2 to lekhar jonno . FERARI r thread e o bolechhi abar o bolchhi , karon BHALO LAGA JE SOB TUKUI

01:26am 03 Mar

Subir
"Kotha chhilo bristi bhalobese/ eksathe kaan patbo kache" ar "Barthota nona swader bristi jhoray ni:shobde(/) hahakar naame"

"hahakar er line break ta thakbe na"

Thik-i to line breakta to ami di-ni, diyechhe kobi nije. Ami asole linegulo verbatim rekhte cheyechhilam. Ar oi "hahakar naame" je aager line er continuation, ebong aro du-tin rokombhabe pora jay, vebe neya jay, seta kobitatir construction-ei poriskar.

Jai hok, abar boli, khub-i bhalo lekha. chaliye jao.



01:30am 03 Mar

Orchzis
Bah !   

07:21am 03 Mar

Aronno

Khub sundor laglo mama



09:36am 03 Mar

Shahed
amar kase khub bhallagse kohinoor

THANK YOU

10:58am 03 Mar

Elomelo
Emon ekta obosthay royechhi je sob reply gulo porte parlam na...but Kohinoor lakhtir sathe tomar swikarokti porlam..sei sutre duto kotha...amar ovimot..tumi nai mante paro.....tomar ei lekhar experimentation choluk khoti nei...kintu nojoshwota hariye jano na jai..ei ta mathai rekho......Upottwakai Iswar er ar Prokitir nijer kheyale fute thaka Fuler bagicha...ar Babur barir garden e malir hathe toiri bagichar moddhe kintu parthokko thake....asha kori bujhte parchho ki bolte chailam......Dekho kohinoor tomake bola jai ei biswas niyei bollum...ami oti nogonno...tai truti jodi hoi...marjona pabo e asha rakhi...
binoto
Elomelo

11:14am 03 Mar

Kohinoor
arre Elo da, thik bolechho . Na na mul moulikotto theke shorbo na . Ami kichhu help/upodesh ni . Actual bYapar ta to bolechhi je amar base nei bhalo.Tai ar ki .. kichhu basic to jantei hoy, Tomra sobai ekhane onek jano onek bojho , tai chesta korchhi joto ta newa jay arki. Aamader Tagore bolechhilen na?

DIBE AR NIBE , MILABE , MILIBE , JABE NAHI FIRE

tai songmisrone onek somoy culture rich hoy , sei arki. Nijer bodh tukui prodhan . Ar seta thakbe asha kori . Noile tomra to achhoi.

Khub bhalo laglo motamot peye

01:06pm 03 Mar

Ami Ahmed
bhaijan

mme dhukei top 3 te apnar nam khujlam o peyeo gelam.

sei apnar ovinobo styler kobita pore besh laglo.jah bar bar bolechhi sei abar fida holam.

erom peices lika jan.

cheers

02:02am 04 Mar

Sagarneel
Bhalo laglo Kohinoor... aro ekta katha bolte chaibo... prochur kobita porar kono bikolpo hoyto sotyi nei...   



02:27am 04 Mar

Ojana
aha besh besh...ami chaya dd er moton pran khlu bolchi na...pran bondho kore bollam sadhu..valo laglo...ha ha ha

03:49am 04 Mar

Sohan
Aadi,
Lekhata bhalo legechey....koekdin ektu byasto achi...pore alochona korbo tor songey   

04:37am 04 Mar

Siddhartha
Obosshoi onnyovabe lekha...Good work Kohinoor...appreciable

<<Siddhartha Da>>

11:19am 04 Mar

Elomelo
Bhai kohinoor..ami(elomelo) onek jani !!! eta holo 2006 er sera jokes     ..are bhai ami mukkhu manush...kaw likhte kolom baNgi  

11:26am 04 Mar

Orchzis
Hmm...lekhar pattern onekta changed !
atleast notun kichu korte hobe bole ingrezir byabohaar nei !   
ingrezi amader modhye onekei use kori .. tobe english font e segulo dile kobitar appearance bodle jaye.ei byapar-ta ageo bolechilam.jantaam akdin byapar ta thik recovered hobe  Nice to see u in a new dress   
Er pichone jader-i obodaan thakuk sobaike dhonyobaad!

Acoustic somporke boli ...
sukanta bhai ...emon kono bangla shobdo ki apnar mathay elo ja acoustic shobdo ta ke replace korte pare?

Greek shobdo " akoustikos " bolte,je kono dhoroner sundor srobonanubhuti ke bojhay.
Any instrument that does not produce sound electronically, can be termed an acoustic one.

Oneker i dekhi aj-kal... semi-solid/round hole/F hole etc ... orthat solid body bade onno sob guitar gulokei "acoustic" bolen.

BD er besh kichu new age gaan eo dekhechi ..tara acoustic bolte sudhu acoustic guitar i bojhe.

Acoustics bollei kintu amar, je kono unplugged -er anubhuti mathaye ase.jemon acoustic drums,acoustic bass etc.
Ato sundor byapti je shobder...take choto akta bangla shobdo die dhore ana jaye ki ?  

05:09am 05 Mar

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